Bonjour est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait corriger mon paragraphe en anglais merci beaucoup d'avance. It was Wednesday the 8th 1905, me and my compagnion went in a
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Bonjour est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait corriger mon paragraphe en anglais merci beaucoup d'avance.
It was Wednesday the 8th 1905, me and my compagnion went in a forest to build a hut but quickly mist surrounded us and I lost companion and I was all alone in a forest I didn't even know. Suddenly, I heard a noise so I turned around but nothing was there, further I heard branches cracking and I turned around and there it was, a grizzly bear was right behind me I panicked and started shouting and running in the woods but it followed me everywhere. So there I was face to face with a grizzly bear ready to eat me alive when suddenly a ball smashed its face, my companion heard me shouting and came to my rescue, after that we went back home and relaxed.
It was Wednesday the 8th 1905, me and my compagnion went in a forest to build a hut but quickly mist surrounded us and I lost companion and I was all alone in a forest I didn't even know. Suddenly, I heard a noise so I turned around but nothing was there, further I heard branches cracking and I turned around and there it was, a grizzly bear was right behind me I panicked and started shouting and running in the woods but it followed me everywhere. So there I was face to face with a grizzly bear ready to eat me alive when suddenly a ball smashed its face, my companion heard me shouting and came to my rescue, after that we went back home and relaxed.
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1. Réponse LightShadow
La seul faute que tu a fait est au lieu de "I lost companion", c'est "I lost my companion"
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