Bonjour à tous j'aurai besoin d'aide en anglais. J'ai fait un texte à propos du dessin animé Alice au pays des merveilles reinventé. Pouvez vous corriger les er
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Bonjour à tous j'aurai besoin d'aide en anglais. J'ai fait un texte à propos du dessin animé Alice au pays des merveilles reinventé. Pouvez vous corriger les erreurs grammaticales de conjugaisons ou autres... Je donne 15pts faites le sérieusement svp
I am going to announance you my extraordinary idea which is going to seduce quite the people fan of Haloween.
I thought that we could transform the cartoon Alice in Wonderland , soft nice and cute in the horror movie where the wonderful world is remplaced by a terrifying world.
Remember that at the beginning Disney they carton had the terrible end. Thus exactly wecould fightened the televiewers during this party by speading this movie.
In summary I would want that Alice comes to take every person waching this cartoon the days of Hlloween and taking him in this terrible world.
She will be in black, a kinfe in the hand and toy rabbit holding watch.
When she has him to take the victim has 24 hours and one seconde more to turn to the real world all the victimes be going to fail, thus Alise us going to stab them and buried.
MERCI BEAUCOUP
I am going to announance you my extraordinary idea which is going to seduce quite the people fan of Haloween.
I thought that we could transform the cartoon Alice in Wonderland , soft nice and cute in the horror movie where the wonderful world is remplaced by a terrifying world.
Remember that at the beginning Disney they carton had the terrible end. Thus exactly wecould fightened the televiewers during this party by speading this movie.
In summary I would want that Alice comes to take every person waching this cartoon the days of Hlloween and taking him in this terrible world.
She will be in black, a kinfe in the hand and toy rabbit holding watch.
When she has him to take the victim has 24 hours and one seconde more to turn to the real world all the victimes be going to fail, thus Alise us going to stab them and buried.
MERCI BEAUCOUP
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1. Réponse Eleve01pbl
I am going to announce you my extraordinary idea which is going to seduce people that are fans of Halloween.
I thought that we could transform the cartoon Alice in Wonderland , which is a soft, nice and a cute film into a horror movie where her wonderful world is replaced by a terrifying world.
Remember that at the orignal story, Disney did a cartoon that had a terrible ending. Thus, we could frighten the televiewers during this party by spreading this movie.
In summary, I would like Alice to come and take every person who is watching this cartoon on the day of Halloween in this terrible world.
She will be in black with a knife in her hand and a toy rabbit who is holding a watch.
When she has them, the victims have 24 hours and one second more to turn to the real world or all the victimes are going to fail and die because Alice will stab them and bury everyone.
Voilà j'espère que je t'ai aidé, j'ai ajouté et enlevé des phrases ou mots qui était invalide.