Bonjour, j'ai un récapitulatif à faire en anglais pour la rentrer et je viens de le faire j'aimerais savoir si il y a des fautes. Pouvez-vous me corriger : This
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Bonjour, j'ai un récapitulatif à faire en anglais pour la rentrer et je viens de le faire j'aimerais savoir si il y a des fautes. Pouvez-vous me corriger :
This document is an e-mail. It is composed of several elements. At the top, we can see a toolbar. There is the subject of the e-mail, the date and the name of the sender. Joanna Wilson sent this e-mail certainly to a family member, a French student of a friend.
Joanna has sent this because she wants to let her visitor know that she’s pleased to host him or her. She also wants to give information about her family, the environment and so one and so forth. Joanna has sent this e-mail so as to prepare the visit of her guest !
To sum up, in this e-mail, a woman called Joanna writes about her family, her house, the area and some activities. In fact, she introduces herself to the guest they are going to host.
Concerning the family, she explains that she lives in a four-person family in Ottawa. Her daughters, attend high school. Jennifer, who is sixteen, is in a bilingual program with half of her courses in French and Ashley studies visual arts. She is eighteen years old. Joanna’s husband, called Michael is a dentist, and Joanna is a physician. Furthermore, the Wilsons also have a Labrador called Dylan.
They live in a spacious four-bedroom house with a twenty by forty (20 X 40) foot in-ground swimming pool in the backyard. Moreover, they have a billiards table in the basement. Their house is located in Ottawa, a medium-sized city, the capital of Canada, close to a network of beautiful lakes where you might enjoy swimming canoeing etc. It is along the banks of the Ottawa river. To sum up, the Wilsons live in a nice environment, and they have a big, comfortable house. Besides that, they have a holiday home in the Laurentian mountains eighty kilometres north of Montreal.
Concerning, the area, she says that Ottawa is a safe city known for having the longest skating rink in the world along Rideau Canal. In Ottawa, they are in the mountains so there are a lot of animals such as deers, racoons, foxes, rabbits and squirrels. The city is extremely natural and rather attractive
Concerning the activities, there are several activities such as white-water rafting on the Ottawa river, karting, mountain biking, volleyball tournaments on the beach. Finally, there are many outdoor concerts in the summertime, particularly in July, when the world-famous Bluefest takes place.
This document is an e-mail. It is composed of several elements. At the top, we can see a toolbar. There is the subject of the e-mail, the date and the name of the sender. Joanna Wilson sent this e-mail certainly to a family member, a French student of a friend.
Joanna has sent this because she wants to let her visitor know that she’s pleased to host him or her. She also wants to give information about her family, the environment and so one and so forth. Joanna has sent this e-mail so as to prepare the visit of her guest !
To sum up, in this e-mail, a woman called Joanna writes about her family, her house, the area and some activities. In fact, she introduces herself to the guest they are going to host.
Concerning the family, she explains that she lives in a four-person family in Ottawa. Her daughters, attend high school. Jennifer, who is sixteen, is in a bilingual program with half of her courses in French and Ashley studies visual arts. She is eighteen years old. Joanna’s husband, called Michael is a dentist, and Joanna is a physician. Furthermore, the Wilsons also have a Labrador called Dylan.
They live in a spacious four-bedroom house with a twenty by forty (20 X 40) foot in-ground swimming pool in the backyard. Moreover, they have a billiards table in the basement. Their house is located in Ottawa, a medium-sized city, the capital of Canada, close to a network of beautiful lakes where you might enjoy swimming canoeing etc. It is along the banks of the Ottawa river. To sum up, the Wilsons live in a nice environment, and they have a big, comfortable house. Besides that, they have a holiday home in the Laurentian mountains eighty kilometres north of Montreal.
Concerning, the area, she says that Ottawa is a safe city known for having the longest skating rink in the world along Rideau Canal. In Ottawa, they are in the mountains so there are a lot of animals such as deers, racoons, foxes, rabbits and squirrels. The city is extremely natural and rather attractive
Concerning the activities, there are several activities such as white-water rafting on the Ottawa river, karting, mountain biking, volleyball tournaments on the beach. Finally, there are many outdoor concerts in the summertime, particularly in July, when the world-famous Bluefest takes place.
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1. Réponse boucennasandriowbcv7
Bonsoir alors voici ce que j’ai relevé
Billiards table . Tu peux dire pool table ou snooker table.
C’est tout ce que j’ai trouvé